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Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
uD600,S600
Shutter Speed
1/640 second
Aperture
F/5.2
Focal Length
17 mm
ISO Speed
64
Date Taken
Nov 30, 1999, 12:00:00 AM
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Little piece of Heaven by bliekya Little piece of Heaven by bliekya
Pretty isn't it? I forgot where this was taken though...
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:icontorivarn:
Hey!

You wanted me to write you a critique for this one. As I tell everyone I write a critique for; don't mind the ratings, they don't teach you anything.

Photographically:
I can see that you very much wanted to capture the sunny beach here.
First off, when you have a horizon, try you best to keep it straight. It's just more natural to look at it like it should be.
I can see that it's automatic settings used here. I don't mind those as long as they work. However I would make sure that I never point a camera towards the sun, this will break your autofocus-sensor. Why am I saying this? It's tempting to take a photo of the sun when it's beautiful and your focus seems off at the capture.
When looking at a scene like this, try to capture the whole beach, I'm guessing it's just doing a curl into the top left or that mountain the background is an island, in that case you're excused :)

I won't write you a post-processing critique, because you'll benefit more from focusing on what's important here.
I'd recommend you to read the instruction manual of your camera, it's important as you want to know what your camera can and cannot do and how it reacts to different settings.
Finally I recommend you to have a look at this video about capturing a scene [link]

I hope this was helpful :)
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:iconrollarius55:
rollarius55 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Waw, so pure...
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:iconbliekya:
bliekya Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Thank you :)
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:iconurahameshi:
UraHameshi Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Thats a pretty picture :)
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:iconbliekya:
bliekya Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Thank you :D
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:icondarkn2ght:
darkn2ght Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
the soft glow on the right is beautiful:love:
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:iconbliekya:
bliekya Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Thank you for your feedback :)
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:icondarkn2ght:
darkn2ght Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
you are welcome:)
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BlueIvyViolet Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
this is gorgeous!!!
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:iconbliekya:
bliekya Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Thank you :)
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:iconblueivyviolet:
BlueIvyViolet Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
you're welcome!
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